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Hi, Everyone. this is my first game ( At least the one that got completed).  I wanted to make some money out of it. Since this is my first game, I didn't have high hopes. But I got rejected by every sponsor I contacted ( I mean the few who replied). So, Anyone who can give me some pointer on how I can make this game or any future game that I'll be making better.

please check out my game lolly match .

Any feedback will be appreciated.

Thanks in Advance.

 

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Lose all the text. Just make everything obvious.
Let me click a color, and just give me all the connected ones.
Once there are no more connections, you automatically reload.
Improve the Sun eating 'animation'. Just cutting it off is not good enough.
Add some 'twinkle/bling' etc.

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@Milton thanks for the feedback. Originally i wanted to do all the tutorial by graphical hints. In the end I choose text because it was easier to implement.  You're right i should've done it the right way. The automatic reload thing needs some alternation in the source code  (I did similar thing in a different game. Here i thought i'll give player some choice so they can fill any color they want. You know what i think i'll do both). ANYWAY ANYONE PLAYED IN A PHONE. I think it has some performance issues there. And at the moment i don't have a clue how to solve that.

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Really nice game, especially for first game. The tutorial is quite long and I just clicked through it. I ended up do not know what I'm doing though due to that. :D

It's also hard to differentiate the orange and the red color for the bubble (the ones queuing to the sun) especially when it's almost empty. Might wanna try to brighten it a bit.

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