jamessimo Posted January 17, 2016 Share Posted January 17, 2016 Hey guys! this is the trailer for my newest game Reach for the Star! It was built using HTML5 Canvas and Javascript with the iioEngine http://iio.js.org/ I have ported it to iOS and Android however I cant share the web build until the iOS and android builds are published. Any feedback on the trailer would be awesome! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jambutters Posted January 17, 2016 Share Posted January 17, 2016 Overall, its a pretty nice simple elegant trailer. Personally though(REALLY EXTREMELY MINOR) , I would remove the: "It may not be easy, but it sure is fun" because people don't want to be told what's fun or not.. Generally I suggest game trailers should end with a challenging vibe or so because this lures in players(heh heh heh, or me at least.....) Ending or setting up a vibe with "Can you reach the star?" or like "How far can you stack?" or "Will you reach the star? Or will you shatter down?" SOMETHING ALONG THOSE LINES. Either way/nevertheless, excellent job setting a fun relaxed simple themed trailer/song. Good luck! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jamessimo Posted January 18, 2016 Author Share Posted January 18, 2016 Thanks for the feedback! I think I may change the launguge as I think your right about people not wanting to be told what to do! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
staff0rd Posted January 18, 2016 Share Posted January 18, 2016 I'd totally play this, get a demo up! jamessimo 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jamessimo Posted January 29, 2016 Author Share Posted January 29, 2016 On 18/01/2016 at 6:46 AM, staff0rd said: I'd totally play this, get a demo up! Hahah thats great to hear I will push a demo up once my publisher sorts out the iOS and Android releases Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fago Posted January 29, 2016 Share Posted January 29, 2016 Very nice concept! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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